tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-626361365897531793.post890037116202406607..comments2024-03-04T00:13:39.649-08:00Comments on Ms. Katie's Ramblings: A "Kerfuffle" to Cover Education Reform's Greatest SecretKatieOhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01072560661013528732noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-626361365897531793.post-73551553109891993342013-02-03T22:29:36.615-08:002013-02-03T22:29:36.615-08:00A great post. Many thanks.
1 small idea: The init...A great post. Many thanks.<br /><br />1 small idea: The initial type of the 3rd section includes a misplaced modifier that produces the particular that looks as if you might be talking about oneself because "Being a enterprise college scholar with sufficient of expertise inside .Page rank and also 'Online technique.'" The actual referent of the initial reliant component may be the sentence subject matter ("We") from the main clause, and never "Rosenberg" (when i think a person meant).<br /><br /><a href="http://www.breathehealthandwellness.com/diagnostic-medical-sonography-schools/" rel="nofollow">ultrasound technician salary</a><br /><br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16540608218102945861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-626361365897531793.post-9099879003423846752012-12-25T11:31:13.381-08:002012-12-25T11:31:13.381-08:00I agree. I wish more people could read this!
Thank...I agree. I wish more people could read this!<br />Thanks for such a thoughtful analysis.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01875235932292981670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-626361365897531793.post-22688686566855791842012-12-24T06:19:01.340-08:002012-12-24T06:19:01.340-08:00Why are you not submitting or writing op-eds for t...Why are you not submitting or writing op-eds for the Tribune or the Sun-Times? We need your words out there for everyone to read, not just wholly devoted Ravitichians. Keep fightin' the good fight. Those Educrat bozos have no idea how strong and swift we truly are.. Merry Christmas!round 1https://www.blogger.com/profile/16287047694321836975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-626361365897531793.post-52731648706462500832012-12-23T16:01:39.351-08:002012-12-23T16:01:39.351-08:00Thanks for the suggestion, I changed it! And than...Thanks for the suggestion, I changed it! And thanks for reading!KatieOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01072560661013528732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-626361365897531793.post-66933531172444830682012-12-23T15:57:35.598-08:002012-12-23T15:57:35.598-08:00An excellent article. Thank you.
One minor sugges...An excellent article. Thank you.<br /><br />One minor suggestion: The first line of the third paragraph contains a dangling modifier that makes the it appear as if you are describing your self as "As a business school graduate with plenty of experience in . . . PR and 'Online Strategy.'" The referent of that introductory dependent element is the grammatical subject ("I") of the independent clause, and not "Rosenberg" (as I suspect you intended).<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01902745379076918358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-626361365897531793.post-78195889200952863492012-12-23T14:43:20.789-08:002012-12-23T14:43:20.789-08:00I would love for this to get picked up by the Time...I would love for this to get picked up by the Times--I could see Valerie Strauss picking it up, but we need it in the Times too. Great work, Katie. Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071764849705834284noreply@blogger.com